The Pitch
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cT_7qjxNWOA
Reflection of Feedback
Feedback:
Hey Caleb, I loved the introduction to your pitch because I think that it grabs many people's attention since it's a common problem. Overall great job!
I think this is a great idea! There are so many issues with ordering clothes online and I'm impressed with your ideas to tackle these problems. Also you did a great job being very charismatic in your pitch, it really drew me in and maintained my attention. I also like your outfit choice- it really adds to your points nicely. I think this idea has a lot of potential and although there is always room for improvement I think you are definitely on the right path to a super successful business idea!
Hello Caleb, definitely have an idea that is going to be in the market sometime in the future. Now I have seen other examples of such camera work in stores before so this is a good thing to look into and learn from. You presentation skills are well, only thing needed to help spice it up is adding statistics and numbers on how online shopping is as a market from all possible aspects. That will help bring the "wow" factor in your pitch.
Certainly a good idea, and very reflective of the direction the fashion industry has been moving in. I think there are some stores that actually have digital mirrors in dressing rooms that offer similar services. Good pitch, might be good to throw in details about how much clothing is ordered online already to emphasize how big the potential market is.
I personally love this idea. I have tried online shopping plenty of times and have specifically passed on buying clothes because I am worried they won't fit properly. The only thing I can say to look into is what kind of market this may work in. Although it may sound ideal-- some people want to see what the color looks like on them or other criteria and not just the fit of the garment. Great idea overall!
Hey Caleb, I loved the introduction to your pitch because I think that it grabs many people's attention since it's a common problem. Overall great job!
I think this is a great idea! There are so many issues with ordering clothes online and I'm impressed with your ideas to tackle these problems. Also you did a great job being very charismatic in your pitch, it really drew me in and maintained my attention. I also like your outfit choice- it really adds to your points nicely. I think this idea has a lot of potential and although there is always room for improvement I think you are definitely on the right path to a super successful business idea!
Hello Caleb, definitely have an idea that is going to be in the market sometime in the future. Now I have seen other examples of such camera work in stores before so this is a good thing to look into and learn from. You presentation skills are well, only thing needed to help spice it up is adding statistics and numbers on how online shopping is as a market from all possible aspects. That will help bring the "wow" factor in your pitch.
Certainly a good idea, and very reflective of the direction the fashion industry has been moving in. I think there are some stores that actually have digital mirrors in dressing rooms that offer similar services. Good pitch, might be good to throw in details about how much clothing is ordered online already to emphasize how big the potential market is.
I personally love this idea. I have tried online shopping plenty of times and have specifically passed on buying clothes because I am worried they won't fit properly. The only thing I can say to look into is what kind of market this may work in. Although it may sound ideal-- some people want to see what the color looks like on them or other criteria and not just the fit of the garment. Great idea overall!
Reflection:
What was most important to me was if I was able to connect with my audience. Many of the reviews said I was able to accomplish that. Further, the idea came up several times that I should include more statistics about online shopping, which I agree with, to show potential investors or buyers of the product that there is an actual market and unmet need. Surprising to me because I have not thought of the idea yet, was that there are other criteria that my product may not meet when people go to buy clothes. This has got me thinking on ways I could incorporate other solutions into my current product. Like some others have suggested, some clothing stores have digital mirrors. In my research it appears that you have to try all the clothes on and the digital mirror takes a picture of it on you. This requires actually trying every piece of clothing on. My product would only require you to stand and take a picture and let the software do the work of mapping it onto the body. Further, the digital mirrors are so few in department stores and have an unknown cost to buy, which I am assuming is very high.
I like that you included what your feedback was into your post so that I have a better idea of what you're talking about when you discuss your improvements. Statistics are always good in that it shows that you truly know what you're talking about and that your idea is necessary. The concept of it being "from the comfort of your home" and also filmed at home I also think is a good touch, because it gives your point a good visual. Keep up the good work and I think your idea is going to turn out great.
ReplyDeleteHey Caleb. You have a great introduction for your online shopping service. I think it's a really awesome idea to have this product for those who have difficulty with finding their sizes in clothing stores and for those, like me, who are too lazy to go out most of the time. Your speech was well-rehearsed and very calm. I would say that a mention of your vision for this product would be the only thing missing from this attempt.
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb,
ReplyDeleteGreat job, I think you did a great job looking into the criticism and improving your pitch. I really like the tone and you definitely connect well with the audience. I think adding the stats was a great touch and really help drive home the point. Great job overall and really impressed with this pitch!
Hi Caleb,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with the pitch. You showed that there is a clear demand for the product and used statistics to show that online shopping is not a fad-like trend. One suggestion, mention the actual product earlier. Until you mentioned your venture I thought you were starting a clothing company. Overall great job!
Hi Caleb,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with the pitch. You showed that there is a clear demand for the product and used statistics to show that online shopping is not a fad-like trend. One suggestion, mention the actual product earlier. Until you mentioned your venture I thought you were starting a clothing company. Overall great job!